tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2182340152318544376.post7383374882943312555..comments2015-09-19T22:09:30.563+12:00Comments on Hannah's e-portfolio : Writing Portfolio SampleHannahKhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06252814010179722209noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2182340152318544376.post-35726497472870026602015-09-16T21:27:32.123+12:002015-09-16T21:27:32.123+12:00Hannah, it is great to see that you had a specific...Hannah, it is great to see that you had a specific audience in mind while you were writing your piece as this helps you to tailor your ideas and language to suit your target audience. I am glad you used your success criteria also as this meant you were reflecting on and evaluating your work and taking steps to better achieve your goal! I love that you set the scene at the beginning of the story and hooked us in to wanting more. You added some great descriptive words and I agree more would make your story even more interesting. You have stuck to the main points well and this makes your story flow and make sense. Keep up the great writing Hannah!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com